Monday, 17 December 2012

Rough cut of short film

I showed the a rough cut of the latest version of my film to my media class to get their opinions on it.


My auddience gave me some useful feedback in which i can use to improve my short film. A list of things they said that i could improve are:


  1. The prop I used for the knife was just a small butter knife and my audience did not find it scary or appropriate for a horror film.
  2. They also said that the beginning of the film she walks for too long and they found this boring.
  3. Lastly my audience found my shots too repetitive and i used the same shots too much and that.
To fix these issues I will re-film the shots where I use the knife and use a much bigger knife to connote more horror. I will also add music to the opening walk of the film to make it seem less boring and help build tension, I will also use much more quick shots as again this will build more tension.

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